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Friday 19 March 2021

Narrative writing 2021

Narrative writing

Names of whos in the story Josh,Elijah

It is all about a crayfish at the beach with Josh and elijah.

There was a crayfish that was in clean, flowing water. There were two humans walking to go to the sea.They were in the sea then one of the humans stepped on the crayfish.They heard it seek and there was lots of crayfish on the ground.But the humans love crayfish so they chase after the crayfish then one of them stepped on a rock .But the one that was raining did not known that his friend josh was stuck. but the one that was running which was Elijah he kept on running then he caught one and he looked back to the land and the BBQ was still on so he rushed back to go and cook his crayfish that he got . On his way back to go and cook it he saw his friend was stuck then Elijah went to get the crayfish pulled his friend up then they went to go and cook one crayfish. Then on their way there was another one on the rock then they cooked two of the crayfish then they started to pack up his stuff.

When they were heading back home when they were driving on the road Josh and Elijah were tired that they were gonna fall asleep. while they were on the road suddenly Elijah that was driving fell asleep. They were gonna hit a big truck but then Josh turned the wheel right after that Elijah woke up and he was scared and asked Josh what happened.So Josh had to explain they moved to the side and Josh was driving while Elijah slept in peace.

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