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Monday 4 November 2019

The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator

I was on the 12th step when i waked up i was in my pyjamas then i when to the door then i saw stairs going up then i went to it then it took me up to the clouds then i was wondering where is parents then i started calling there name after i call there name they said that they are over here after they said that i said where about are guys then i could not find them so i just keep on going up the stairs then i saw my parents then went up to the clouds they were on the clouds when i saw them i said there you guys are then i said how did you guy got up there they said they just waked up and they were on the clouds they did not have there bed also you can see the sea from the stairs it was cool and shallow.

Tuesday 22 October 2019

in the playground

What can you say about the child who is first onto the playground tomorrow morning break time?







Monday 21 October 2019

the bing game

there was an game that Room 10 played so there were something that we had to do there were honed house,ping,wish,Hawaiian i had lot of fun.

Friday 18 October 2019

Recount Writing - Week 1 Term 4

On Saturday I went to the rainbow’s end we went there because it was the school holidays.There were my family then when we were going to put out the wristband on i had to wait for my family.To get there one so we can go together. After they all got there one we all went in there were indoors playground and the rides were outside but then we had to look for out spot where our spot were it was near the log,roller coaster also the indergater first ride I went on was the log my favourite part was when you come down  i was so scard than my Aunt was waiting for me to come down as soon i came down she took a video then i went to her she showed me the video.The next one was the indergater when i was going to it they opened the gate so we could go on it when I sat down the man said your chair is going to be tied then it was starting then i was screaming then it keeps on going until it stops. Then i was starting to like it so I keep on going i went on for 6 times then i went to the roller coaster it went so fast then when it was going to stop I was feeling like i was going to spew then we walked out then we went to the bumper cars after that we had to go and have lunch then we went on some rides before we went home.

Wednesday 16 October 2019

dimc 2019 maths


Adding detail Task


WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing
WALT write a range of correct sentence types
During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.
Read this simple recount.
What do you notice about the recount?
I notice that there is a lot of we
What could we add to this recount to make it more detailed?
Is that adding full stops.
Edit this recount above to make it more detailed

During the holiday, I went to the sunny beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball net. they said sure you can play with it .Before we were going to play i could hear the kids playing at the park . I could smell the salty sea when we were playing .We played volleyball i could feel the ball it was hard . we played for about an hour . then we had 4 boxes of pizza for lunch it tasted so yummy . Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family were it was then we thank you . after that, we packed our stuff to go back home . I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.


Monday 14 October 2019

maths dimc


life is a stage.



The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator.

they were to close to the then they  ackack London  it was only a meter of time until they were nether of then ackack London but lower down hte paris brige there was cars going past ans past then the people the were going to shot  they got some people the was driving past paris brige then there was an car asaed then there were bomes with the fire went everywhere the place.

Monday 23 September 2019

The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator.

There was a girl that was walking to go to her bedroom with her mum. When they were heading to go to the girl's room there was a bird that flew onto the girl's head. The mum heard the girl say AAAAAh. There is a bird on me. The  mum turned on her phone and switched on  the flash light.The girl was screaming and  the mum did not know what to do so she slapped  the bird. The bird  flew away.  When her  mum and the girl went to the girl's room the girl was scard so she asked her mum if she could come and sleep with her. Her mum said come on you can do it then the. Girl said okay you are right said the girl \the mum said good night.Then the girl went to sleep. 


this was the Most Dangerous writing prompt Generator and we had 5 minutes if you did this then how did you feel?.

Thursday 12 September 2019

maths work.

Animation, planner

Hi and welcome to my animation we are learning about sea creatures and that is about something in the water.

So first it was the fish trying to get the seagull that was flying above of the fish but the fish could not get him.

This is my food web that i did.

This is my sea creature it was looking for food then he found one and it was a mollusc.

Monday 9 September 2019

dimc blog post 1 week 8


The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator.

there was an man the was riding the bike and then when he was doing that he saw a big clif then he went to look but then he was scard of cliffs so he tryed his best to go and look what heppend there he try it so care fallibly that he could do it he was so scars to go but he did it he lefted his bike at the back of him so he could brand down to look what has happen

this was an writing that was could not try to stop.

Wednesday 4 September 2019

proofreading and Editing

writing,2019

there  was an rat that came from the top to get some cheese that was on the rat trap and he wanted it so what he did was when he got an rope and he stared to  try and put the rope on him self and then try and come down with the rope but he it trying to not get trap  with the rat trap  when he did that  he must of got it  and eat a bit  he was sneaking to get the cheese so he can just eat a bit of the cheese  he must of been hungry. this was an 5  minute challenge we can not stop.

Friday 30 August 2019

food chain Narrative

There was a crayfish that was in clean, flowing water. There were two humans walking to go to the sea.They were in the sea then one of the humans stepped on the crayfish.They heard it seek and there was lots of crayfish on the ground.But humans love crayfish so they chase after the crayfish then one of them stepped on a rock .But the one that was raining did not known that his mate was stuck but the one that was raining keeps on raining then he caught one and he looked back to the land and the BBQ was still on so he rushed back to go and cook his crayfish t]on his way back to go and cook it he saw his mate he was stuck then his mate that went to get the crayfish pulled his mate up then they went to go and cook one crayfish then on there way there was another one on the rock then they cooked two of the crayfish then they started to pack up his stuff and they were lying on their towel then they fell asleep they woke up and the sun was shining.       

Monday 19 August 2019

The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator.

there was an car that was in a pool and that when the man that lived in the house where that car went the man call his brother to can and see this and then then the brother can then he said what just happed here did someone came and try to rake our pool only if i known who did this i could do this to there if they have an pool i can just get my car and just go up to that house and just go into the poll and just leave the pool and see what is going to happen if they come back home and see this car is in there pool i wonder what they are going to do when they do .

Wednesday 14 August 2019

The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator.

one day there was an ant that was on an log and the he was putting it u8p the the sun was rinsing to shine and be bringt and to be rigley shne to tbhe place where it is  it might of been eainging there it was an stoge ant that could hold thelog that he was on he must of hadfun when he did that byhime self on the log he must of had help from his freids and that he trys to holud on to it so he could be stog from his dad or mum the mum and dad must of told him how to do it whit a log that will be outside.  this was fun writing this for the? so there was an man that went to look at an big elphelt that was suck on the ice that the elephants was so when he went to go look at him the elephants and the elephants was so cold and he did not want to go back that to the man because he was frozen where the ice was so maybe he got him self out of that big ice that he was suck on he must got cold and cold so maybe the man that was look at the elephants went to help the elephants get out he must of got stuckin with the elephants it may of be the keeper of that elephants vit must of been there worst day of  there week

Monday 5 August 2019

The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator

there was an cat it was stuck on the water fall it was on the rock and the elephant was looking at the cat  the waterfall it was so small and the elephant was so big and and the cat  it was stuck on the rock and  there were some  water coming out from the wetter fall and there was more rocks on the water there was green stuff and it was toward the cat that was on the rock the cat was so so scard https://www.google.com/search?q=elephant+saving+the+cat&rlz=1CAHLQR_enNZ787NZ787&tbm=isch&tbas=0&source=lnt&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiJxvC14OzjAhUXXn0KHZqSBWQQpwUIIQ&biw=1517&bih=694&dpr=0.9&safe=active&ssui=on#imgrc=_

Wednesday 24 July 2019

dimc 2019 maths


  • this is what we had to do for our dimc for 2019.

sea and shore A story world collection.

bimc maths 2019 term 3.

this is what we did today for our dimc 2019 term 3 we had to writ 8+8+8+8+8 and it was 40 then we had to do it so we did 8x5= then it was 40 thanks for reading. 

Wednesday 19 June 2019