Wednesday, 30 October 2019
Wednesday, 23 October 2019
Tuesday, 22 October 2019
Monday, 21 October 2019
the bing game
there was an game that Room 10 played so there were something that we had to do there were honed house,ping,wish,Hawaiian i had lot of fun.
Friday, 18 October 2019
Recount Writing - Week 1 Term 4
On Saturday I went to the rainbow’s end we went there because it was the school holidays.There were my family then when we were going to put out the wristband on i had to wait for my family.To get there one so we can go together. After they all got there one we all went in there were indoors playground and the rides were outside but then we had to look for out spot where our spot were it was near the log,roller coaster also the indergater first ride I went on was the log my favourite part was when you come down i was so scard than my Aunt was waiting for me to come down as soon i came down she took a video then i went to her she showed me the video.The next one was the indergater when i was going to it they opened the gate so we could go on it when I sat down the man said your chair is going to be tied then it was starting then i was screaming then it keeps on going until it stops. Then i was starting to like it so I keep on going i went on for 6 times then i went to the roller coaster it went so fast then when it was going to stop I was feeling like i was going to spew then we walked out then we went to the bumper cars after that we had to go and have lunch then we went on some rides before we went home.
Thursday, 17 October 2019
Wednesday, 16 October 2019
Adding detail Task
WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing
WALT write a range of correct sentence types
During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.
Read this simple recount.
What do you notice about the recount?
I notice that there is a lot of we
What could we add to this recount to make it more detailed?
Is that adding full stops.
Edit this recount above to make it more detailed
During the holiday, I went to the sunny beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball net. they said sure you can play with it .Before we were going to play i could hear the kids playing at the park . I could smell the salty sea when we were playing .We played volleyball i could feel the ball it was hard . we played for about an hour . then we had 4 boxes of pizza for lunch it tasted so yummy . Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family were it was then we thank you . after that, we packed our stuff to go back home . I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.
Tuesday, 15 October 2019
Monday, 14 October 2019
The Most Dangerous Writing Prompt Generator.
they were to close to the then they ackack London it was only a meter of time until they were nether of then ackack London but lower down hte paris brige there was cars going past ans past then the people the were going to shot they got some people the was driving past paris brige then there was an car asaed then there were bomes with the fire went everywhere the place.
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