my writing about white water rafting.

“Are you coming or not?” she/he demanded as she/he took a few steps further into the bout then off they went there was an hill going down kiarah was so scard to go down kiarah does not like hills then kiarah feft the bout going down so she closed her eyes and screamed as the bout was going down the long hill then she feft something smooth the she took a piked and looked if they made it as she piked she was so happy because they made it to the ground of the river then the bout went as fast it could go kiarah liked when the bout when fast then kiarah saw an waterfall she loves white waterfalls and the bout keeped on going and going until it had to stop.