Week 3 Writing: Narrative.

Once upon a time there were two boys One day jame and Bob heard songs coming from then jame went in the home there was songs also Bob said that the food smell so good but when Bob eat the food the next day bob felt so sick then he was watching tv then he saw pramisster on the tv that the got shot at the party so he’s mens came to get him then they dragged him to the van and took him they just need to put an plaser the the pramisster came back for he’s families party they saw him back all of the people was happy the end.